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Nicoss

A thesis is a foraml study of a subject matter, a written report that explores a topic, a research paper. The narrative is all the words in the paper/report/thesis. An outline of your narrative is an outline of the study/paper/report/thesis you will be writing. Each year in English classes, you write, starting with words, then sentences, then paragraphs, then stories and essays. How to do each has been explained to you over the years, including how to outline (organize an outline is a method of summarizing the writing's organization) each (paragraph, story, essay what to write first, second, third, etc., and why you put thoughts/points in a certain order). Each of these built upon the one that came before: an essay is an organized group of paragraphs, a paragraph is an organized group of sentences, etc. All of this has been leading up to a thesis, where you choose a topic, research and make notes on the writings of others on the topic, organize the information into a logical writing, analyze what you've learned and add to the literature or knowledge on the subject by adding your own reasoned thoughts and ideas, which you justify by using others' works and your own analysis. You've been taught how to outline: A. ___. Indented and under A: 1. __ 2. __ 3, __, Maybe a. __ and b. __ under some or all of the numbers. Then B. __ C__ Your textbook Table of Contents is an outline of the material in the textbook. (You can think of the textbook as a long thesis.)First, you choose a topic. One current possible subject is Childhood Obesity: a lot is being written, reported, and studied on that. You'd do some preliminary research and pick one aspect of the subject as your topic: for example, Overcoming the Causes of Childhood Obesity. Research that, make notes (including information to make correct citations of others' work on the topic), think about it from various angles (is there an umbrella under which all causes can be grouped or are the reasons too different), try to think of an umbrella or classification for the reasons. What various ways can the causes be overcome? Think how your thesis will run what you'll say first, second, third. Then write the outline (the Table of Contents, if you will, of your paper).A thesis involves a lot of work and takes a lot of time (weeks, if not months). Your teacher is breaking it down into parts to guide you. She probably handed you a sheet of information; if not, she discussed it in class. She has deadlines for several of the parts to be turned in, because you can't do it all in two weeks and she's helping you stay on top of the project so you can do it and do it well. Being able to complete a project that can take months (even years) when you have other things to do is a very, very valuable skill (a large part of life), and she's trying to teach you how to do it by helping you do it once on a relatively small scale.You can expect to do at least one thesis in your senior high school year, and probably in your junior year. In college, expect to do at least one or two each semester for different courses, not just your English courses. They will be longer, more detailed, and more complex and will take hundreds of hours of effort and no one will be standing over you and reminding you that this needs to be done by now if you're to meet the paper's deadline and get a good grade on it. Theses are assigned so you learn valuable information (and in the hope that you'll add to the collective knowledge on the subject). Your teacher is preparing you to do them for college, and for many, many types of jobs after college, by having you do this one. Because you don't even understand her words, you have a lot of re-reading and catching up to do, because, I can assure you, this was not the first time the project was mentioned. This was only a reminder of the deadlines for two parts of it. (Even if you think you'll never have a job where you must write a report, EVERY job requires that you understand different things and juggle different tasks, many of which occur over long periods of time, so the organization, analysis, reasoning, and time management parts of the thesis will aid you no matter what type of work you do.)

Ricky

Thanks Jeremy I am taking your adcive, and have actually started writing. I easily have enough to begin the overview, hypothesis, and much of the general speech therapy descriptions. I've been reading design thinking books now, and gathering that information. I like that process write as much as you can, sort it out later.I also agree with you. Flaw is my own word, which comes from an ignorance in how to be more nuanced when writing for a larger professional audience. I often call my own stuttering a problem and my own disfluencies screw ups or mistakes , which doesn't portray them in a positive light either. I think the word I am looking for is deficiencies, which seems to be a more palatable word in this case. What do you think? I am looking at what speech therapies lack/don't take into account, and flaw doesn't do that justice at all.As for the amount of work involved, yes, it seems quite daunting. I am trying to focus down a bit more, since the amount of research involved to come up with a comprehensive program could, in reality, take a lifetime. What I feel would be easiest to attain now is to create a system and platform for implementation let me explain:I am learning that many therapists are aware that each individual requires an individualized therapy, which is something I didn't expect to find as much of. But to administer a comprehensive individual therapy for every patient is almost impossible for a therapist there has to be some main foundation they draw from, and to customize everything for each individual is possibly just too inefficient with a proactive patient or extreme dedication.But if I can show how design thinking could create a system that can act as a basis for this individualized therapy (in essence, create the tools and the platform for it), then it can grow organically as others lend their expertise to it and without my lifetime of research to satisfy every condition. As long as a I show the potential and have some examples of how it could all work, that would satisfy this thesis, I feel.

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